This is the fourth installment of this year’s Hitch It / Ditch It Hot Seat critique series. The concept is straight-forward: I identify one element in the participant’s comic that is working really well, and then I identify something that needs to be improved. As always, this is only the start of the conversation — the discussion continues in the Comments section below. Links are in the headers.

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