The first part of the random punchline critique went pretty well, so let’s press on. In a few of these, I’m going to re-write the punchline — but not for the reason you might think. I’m not trying to go funnier. I’m trying to demonstrate construction. I want to show how you re-assembling the logical steps along the progression of your comic can lead to a more polished punchline. It may not seem funnier for your sense of humor. But I’m confident that if you pay attention to the construction, you’ll be able to take away somethin that works for you.

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