Wow Brad, thanks! That’s a lot of solid advice. I’ll work on that SEO. That would resolve a lot of my issues with the title. Thanks also for the critique. It was unexpected, but much appreciated.

I was just thinking about color saturation the other night while I was finishing the latest comic. I toned down the background a lot, but tit still quite work. I agree about that black column too. My fault for recycling an old background (bad Bob!).

I reread this week’s comic, and you’re absolutely right. I could have used the first bubble in panel 1 and the last bubble in panel 2, jettisoned the bubbles in between, and it would have read just fine (actually better). Writing is one of my big areas for improvement this year, so this really hit home.

Thanks again!

Hey Matt – Yeah, I’m pretty much in your path 1. I’ve decided to push the Kickstarter back in order to have everything in place to offer both books 1 and 2. I’ll do a small run of each ahead of time for the shows I’m exhibiting at this fall.